I didn't enjoy reading this online post mostly because Mr. Itzkoff makes sense in the beginning then just rambles off into a question at the end. I did however like the way Itzkoff titled each paragraph with a clever comparison that people could relate to. I just wish he could have finished with a complete thought rather than just trailing off at the end by combining two paragraphs that should have been seperated and then ending with a question.
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